UPdate on "King of the Mountain"

I believe I can blur out "Reacher"'s character and hopefully replace him with my own and then let him tell the story at times in first person. I will do the same with the female FBI agent character in Season 3 "Reacher". I have begun my fourth chapter. I call it, "Experiencing a Web of Beauty" Sorry. I guess I sound a lot like technician, or programmer, who proudly fixed a bug. I get intense at times. I blame it on my place on the autistic scale at the Mr. William Gates level or better, as in worse. I feel my focus may burn my public, clients, readers, or colleagues. Please help me to get that fear under control. Also, I need an editor. I say too much too soon, but I am not sure when or where. Also, I have over sized my hero and heroine (Tag Team) to to a cartoonist extent. I laugh at my own descriptions. Well the Hero will get a slow but debilitating disease that he heroically and of course extremely painfully over comes any and all obstacles. Still too much is too much. I need a skilled surgeon to cut away the fat and leave male and female archetypes that all must see avenging angels, existing for eternity. I hope all is well in DEV land. Thomas Koszoru

Mar 21, 2025 - 05:12

I believe I can blur out "Reacher"'s character and hopefully replace him with my own and then let him tell the story at times in first person. I will do the same with the female FBI agent character in Season 3 "Reacher".

I have begun my fourth chapter. I call it, "Experiencing a Web of Beauty"

Sorry. I guess I sound a lot like technician, or programmer, who proudly fixed a bug.

I get intense at times.

I blame it on my place on the autistic scale at the Mr. William Gates level or better, as in worse.

I feel my focus may burn my public, clients, readers, or colleagues.

Please help me to get that fear under control.

Also, I need an editor. I say too much too soon, but I am not sure when or where. Also, I have over sized my hero and heroine (Tag Team) to to a cartoonist extent. I laugh at my own descriptions.

Well the Hero will get a slow but debilitating disease that he heroically and of course extremely painfully over comes any and all obstacles. Still too much is too much. I need a skilled surgeon to cut away the fat and leave male and female archetypes that all must see avenging angels, existing for eternity.

I hope all is well in DEV land.

Thomas Koszoru